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« on: November 30, 2007, 11:48:37 AM » |
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It only got runner-up but still, I thought I'd post it here since I'd mentioned it before. http://www.remedi.ie/education.php?id=63 |
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« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2007, 01:20:45 PM » |
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Congrats. Only second place.  |
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« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2007, 01:24:03 PM » |
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Congrats. Only second place. Apparently mine had better science content but the winner's was a more polished writing style (I haven't read any of the others yet). |
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« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2007, 07:55:40 AM » |
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That's pretty cool. Genetics promises huge possibilities in the future. It would be a great place to make your career.
Funny how important writing is. You just can't escape the need to be able to construct clear and stylish prose.
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« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2007, 10:35:53 AM » |
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That's pretty cool. Genetics promises huge possibilities in the future. It would be a great place to make your career.
Funny how important writing is. You just can't escape the need to be able to construct clear and stylish prose.
That comment plagues me everytime I write. One of the reasons I went to this forum was to improve my writing. Congrats on the essay IamMe. |
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« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2007, 08:47:17 PM » |
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Believe it or not, there's a book on punctuation that's actually pretty readable. It's called Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation. It covers such mysteries as commas and the possessive. Actually a fairly good read, considering the type of book it is. Some of the most common errors I see are: - misspelling "its" and "it's." The latter is only used to denote the contraction of "it is." (And should the period be inside or outside the quotation mark? That's something I always have trouble with).
- Their, there, or they're?
- When to use who or whom.
Other than that, the errors I see are just really sloppy sentence structure. However, I understand that many poster here, including at times myself, just type in a stream of consciousness and don't worry much about how correct the wording is. IAmMe: my suggestion for teaching yourself how to write well is to read good literature. It just kind of soaks in. The other suggestion is to keep taking classes that require you to write papers. Nothing beats that instant feedback.[/list] |
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« Last Edit: December 09, 2007, 08:51:35 PM by jpn of Seattle »
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« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2007, 02:26:42 PM » |
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That's pretty cool. Genetics promises huge possibilities in the future. It would be a great place to make your career.
Funny how important writing is. You just can't escape the need to be able to construct clear and stylish prose.
That comment plagues me everytime I write. One of the reasons I went to this forum was to improve my writing. Congrats on the essay IamMe. Thank you. |
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« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2007, 02:32:40 PM » |
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Believe it or not, there's a book on punctuation that's actually pretty readable. It's called Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation. It covers such mysteries as commas and the possessive. Actually a fairly good read, considering the type of book it is. Some of the most common errors I see are: - misspelling "its" and "it's." The latter is only used to denote the contraction of "it is." (And should the period be inside or outside the quotation mark? That's something I always have trouble with).
- Their, there, or they're?
- When to use who or whom.
Other than that, the errors I see are just really sloppy sentence structure. However, I understand that many poster here, including at times myself, just type in a stream of consciousness and don't worry much about how correct the wording is. IAmMe: my suggestion for teaching yourself how to write well is to read good literature. It just kind of soaks in. The other suggestion is to keep taking classes that require you to write papers. Nothing beats that instant feedback. That "its" vs "it's" thing used to get me until very recently.[/list] |
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« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2007, 09:42:27 PM » |
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It only got runner-up but still, I thought I'd post it here since I'd mentioned it before. Since I participated in several debates about GSO and cloning with my students I am kind of expecting that any discussion about genetics and mutations is focused on human genetic diseases. Students seem to find certain things less attractive, like the importance of mutations as a source of intraspecies diversity, genetic engineering for discovering gene function and improving traits in economically important plants and animals, production of cheap drugs... Did you have the max number of words limit? Nice essay. if I wrote like that, I wouldn't have to sent my papers to US for lecturing. I am surprised that you are allowed to quote wikipedia. I was raised in "cite the original paper" environment. It's called Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation.
It covers such mysteries as commas and the possessive. I use How to write & publish a scientific paper. |
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« Reply #9 on: December 11, 2007, 01:53:40 PM » |
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It only got runner-up but still, I thought I'd post it here since I'd mentioned it before. Since I participated in several debates about GSO and cloning with my students I am kind of expecting that any discussion about genetics and mutations is focused on human genetic diseases. Students seem to find certain things less attractive, like the importance of mutations as a source of intraspecies diversity, genetic engineering for discovering gene function and improving traits in economically important plants and animals, production of cheap drugs... Did you have the max number of words limit? Nice essay. if I wrote like that, I wouldn't have to sent my papers to US for lecturing. I am surprised that you are allowed to quote wikipedia. I was raised in "cite the original paper" environment. Thank you very much. There was a 1000 word limit so there was lots of stuff I had to leave out (I wanted much more discussion on the Precautionary Principle for one thing). |
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